Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Read our colour poems! We typed them ourselves using the laptop pod.

Blue
Blue is the sky at the beach.
Blue is a Dolphin under water.
Blue tastes like blue pen .
Blue smells like a big snapper .
Blue sounds like blue waves .
Blue feels like salt water .
Blue looks like a big blue lolliepop .
Blue makes me sad .
Blue is my favourite colour.

By tai

RED
Red is a stop sign .
Red is a trafic light shining .
Red tastes like a strawberry .
RED smells like a fire .
RED sounds like a Westpac helicopter .
RED feels like a fire .
RED looks like a sunset .
RED makes me happy .
RED is my favourite colour.

By Mitchell



White
White is a Lamb.
White is milk.
White tastes like white chocolate.
White smells like white paint.
White sounds like white water.
White feels like white cloud.
White looks like a white rubber.
White makes me feel good because there is white chocolate .
White is my favourite colour.

By Kobey

RED
Red is A RED CAR.
Red A CRAYON .
Red is A FIRE ENGINE .
RED TASTES LIKE A STRAWBERRY .
RED smells like A RED ROSE .
RED sounds like FIRE ENGINE.
RED feels like SUNBURN.
RED looks like A RED CAR .
Red makes me FEELS HAPPY .
RED is my favourite colour.

By LYNDON

Orange
Orange is a runny yolk of an egg.
Orange is a juicy ice-block.
Orange tastes like delicious Burger King.
Orange smells like sweet/sour oranges.
Orange sounds like orange leaves crunching under my foot.
Orange feels like squidgy orange paint.
Orange looks like a bouncy ball .
Orange makes me calm and relaxed .
Orange is my favourite colour.

By Braedyn

Red
Red is the sunset on a tropical island.
Red is a hot colour.
Red tastes like a rose.
Red sounds like a fire engine .
Red feels like a bright colour .
RED looks like a fire .
ReD makes me ANGRY .
RED is my favourite colour.

By LIAM.

Orange
Orange is like a cuddly blanket .
Orange is a colour I like.
Orange tastes like a yummy orange .
Orange smells like a big bowl of paint .
Orange feels like a long orange hard stick.
Orange looks like a big juicy orange .
Orange makes me happy and brave .
Orange is my favourite colour.

By Ben


Red
Red is fire.
Red is a stawberry.
RED tastes like McDoneds a Happy Meal.
RED smells like Hot chilli.
RED sounds like ANGRY PEOPLE.
RED feels like A hot day at the beach .
RED looks like A sunset on a summers night.
Red makes me feel warm .
Red is my favourite colour.

By Matthew

6 comments:

  1. Ben I like your sentces you have put a lot of detail in them

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  2. tai i like your colour poem and it was relly cool maybe next time you should try using more descripdive bits about blue

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  3. koby
    I really like your poem.
    I really liked the fifth line in your poem.
    I like White chocolate too.

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  4. ben your colour poem is relly great .you had good desrcibeing maybe nexttime .try to leave more fullstops.

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  5. to Matthew.your poem about red is very good.your 7th line was great!next time try to make your poem a little more descriptive but other wise its great.

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  6. I really like your poem year 3 boys becase they have heaps of descriding words.

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